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[email protected] в категроии Английский язык, вопрос открыт 26.09.2018 в 15:49

Dear Ann,
This Maria . I'm thirteen years old. I'm from Ukraine. We talked recently.
There are four people in my family: mom, dad, my younger sister and me.. There are also Pets in our family. A cat named the Luna and a dog named Rem. My sister is four and she is already dancing.
After school I go for a walk with friends. But on Tuesdays and Thursdays I practice dancing. after dinner I usually rest or watch TV with my family.
What do you do after school? How do you spend time with your family?
Maybe I'll see you again?
Best wishes
Mary