Можете проверить ЭССЕ на грамматические ошибки(на составление предложений и тд)Why do you choose UFAZ?

sophie в категроии Английский язык, вопрос открыт 26.07.2017 в 16:22

There are several reasons, why I have decided to choose UFAZ. First, I would like to mention that I was so glad when I found out that UFAZ has the faculty, which I am interested in.
Firstly, UFAZ has partnership with the leading universities of Europe, which I think will help me in realization of my future plans. Secondly, you are making a contribution in development of science and technologies, again with the foreign partners, which will help me to build up my education and career according to international standards. Another reason is that it would definitely be a very efficient and successfully method to improve my English.
Last but not least, I would like to emphasize that, UFAZ will help me to get education of my dream, and open up the doors for my future career.